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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 22:00:14 GMT -5
REAL BIG FAN OF YOURS , "I am lost,
in a sea of stars,
the past is past,
and the future is forever,
how long will I be lost?" QUITE THE JOKE TO YOU ,"so, hon. welcome to the distorted world.what's your name?""Maria Traydor,may I ask yours?" "ey, that's pretty cute. how old are you, and where are ya affiliated?""I'm...well,I was placed as leader of Quark,a organization that stands opposed to the federation...thats all i'll say on that.My age? 19...and don't bother,I don't have time for love interests i'm afraid."(Earth) "young'un, are you? well then, i can deal. so... how bout you and me go on a date?""Haha...I think not." "aaand.. what is your specialization?""Well...(are guns used here?)I am skilled with a'metal bow'.I also am skilled with'data collecting'(I mustn't say programming). |
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 22:50:39 GMT -5
"cool, cool. i guess youre a little talented filly? i like 'em like that."
"Are you through joking around?You remind me of someone..."
KISSED ME IN YOUR ROOM ,
"and on to the second section! how tall are you, exactly?"
"5'3",what is all this about? Did Cliff send you...I swear if you ask my measurements..."
"ah, just three inches taller. hm. so, what's under your clothes? not that i wont find out for myself."
"Ok,maybe I should make this clear...you will not be seeing ANYTHING,Ok?".(a little scrawny)
"okay, sorry. let's talk about some..non-crude things? what's your personal style?"
"Oh.um,my clothes? I wear my Quark uniform,which is made of well...unique material,its hard to find in these parts..."
"hey, you look like that celebrity...what was the name...?"
"I think i'm more infamous then famous honestly."
"right! i remember now. you look just like them. except better, heh heh..."
"Sure(weirdo)."
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 23:11:52 GMT -5
REPLIED I LOVE YOU TOO ,
"soo, do you like or dislike anything?"
"Honestly,I don't like leading,the reason i'm the leader of Quark was because its previous leader,almost forced it on me.I am seriously considering dispanding it. Other then that...I have a power that I was given,to do something I never chose to do,its not your business though."
"ohmyjonas, me too! wow, thats such a coincidence. so have any dirty habits or secrets?"
"Like I said,only a few people know about my secret,actually this universes secret...I prefer to keep it that way."
"coolness, yo. umm. home dawg. anyways. describe yourself."
"Home dog? Is this planet based on the...oops! I-I mean,yeah dog...anyway i'm very serious usually and have been told my blue hair makes me look like i'm Fayts sister,but i'm not."
"like dude! we're so compatible..."
Rolls eyes "When will this end?"
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 23:29:09 GMT -5
A LITTLE BIT INSECURE ,
"okay, let's rush through this. i'm thinking dancing? then, we can talk about rooms."
"No...and no rooms with you either."
"shh, if my boss knew about our secret romance... so. what's your heritage?"
"Boss? I knew it,Cliff...why didn't Mirage stop him? My parents are scientists who adopted me,when I was a baby on Moonbase,so I don't know my true heratige...If you work for Cliff you already know that..."
"wow, your family would loveme! have anyone else in your family?"
"Not really,no."
"oh. sounds horrible. haha. anything else important happen in your life?"
"Look...I don't know who you are or if this is a trick of some sort,but listen. Me and two others were experimented on as children...by our own parents! It wasnt their fault though,they had to or...well you and I wouldn't be here right now. I can't tell you more,sorry."
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 23:38:39 GMT -5
"hey, look! we're done. so, i would ask you on a second date, but i'm about to explode. no, really. please step back."
"Your gonna what?!"
OF THIS MISTREATMENT ,
name mystery or maria
age 25
rp experience. 1 and a half.
rules. Thundaga
rp sample.
FROM LENNETH
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 23:40:47 GMT -5
"The dark energy continues to gather,my lord. " a man with jet black hair spoke this as he approched the highly polished throne of the tyrant king.Lennith floated far above listening as they made there dark plans."So they plan to revive the dark art of black magic...Blasphemous!"Lenneth knew of there plan but did not want to recklessly destroy the entire kingdom.It had already been in enough turmoil due to its tyrantual king. She decided the best course would be to annihilate the evil ruler and his henchmen,of which it seemed were now gathered in their great hall.
Within the hall sat the king and three vassals,one of which was the black haired man who seemed to be the kings right hand.He and the one who had blonde hair and a scar running across his face standing to his right were heavily armored,and wore swords at their sides.
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 23:41:46 GMT -5
The white haired man to the left however seemed to be a mage.He wore a black robe and held a book(most likely magical) at his side."Indeed...it is time to show these tainted mortals the gods wrath." Lenneth flew straight through the large stained glass window and landed in the room standing a good distance from her enemies. "Lenneth Valkyrie... we've been expecting you." The evil king almost spit the words,but then he smiled.
Looking at the disgusting smile sickened Lenneth greatly.Then she noticed she was surrounded by the others,the black haired man stood in front of his king,while the other two were to her left(the mage and right (the scar face)."You seem to be confident defieller of souls,you truly think lord Odin would allow this?Your acts will not be tolerated!"She drew her sword and prepared to face them.
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 2, 2011 23:43:01 GMT -5
"You can't stop me foolish woman!I have mastered the dark arts behold!" The king made a odd gesture with his hand,and a massive barrier surrounded Lenneth."Now you are powerless hahahaha,destroy her!"The black hair man turned to his scarred comrade"You have the privilege,Gregory,strike her down."The one named Gregory grinned"I'll be glad to..."He rushed at her with his sword above his head.
"This is ridiculous..."Lenneth thought,"They believe this barrier is working? I suppose they never even realised that this spell is flawed..."She leaped into the air and brought her sword down to the ground on decent. A shockwave emitted from the blow and shattered the barrier easily.Gregory stopped in his tracks,mouth hung low in surprise.The king stood up and roared "Impossible! This spell was supposed to have been prefected!!"He glared menacingly at the mage.
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Post by Lightning Farron on Apr 2, 2011 23:53:12 GMT -5
First things first, you'll need to resize the source of your account's picture - if it loads improperly, it stretches the page to unimaginable proportions. Proboards cannot resize itself, so you'll either have to find a smaller picture or remove it altogether.
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Post by Albel Nox on Apr 5, 2011 2:50:55 GMT -5
I'm taking over due to Lightning's absence. Maria sounds too defensive throughout the first and second post. If you could lower her defensiveness, then I'll accept you. Maria was never that defensive in my memory.
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Post by mariatraydor on Apr 5, 2011 11:23:28 GMT -5
If you meant the parts with the gun pointing,its changed.
I agree that I made her a little to 'bad ass'.
Also added her affiliation,in case its not obvious.
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Post by Albel Nox on Apr 5, 2011 13:21:05 GMT -5
Alright~ The parts that were concerning me are gone.
ACCEPTED
Go forth, leader of Quark!
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