Rebellious Soul // Templar Aidan Guaire

[fahrenheit90]

real big fan of yours ,

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quite the joke to you ,

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"so, hon. welcome to the distorted world.
what's your name?"
"Templar Aidan Guaire. Some called me Temp, some called me Aidan, some called me "The Public Enemy of Cocoon", pick one."

"ey, that's pretty cute. how old are you, and where are ya affiliated?"
"24 June, I'm at the age of 22 and I'm affiliated with Cocoon."

"young'un, are you? well then, i can deal. so... how bout you and me go on a date?"
"You're buying? I'll go if you're buying... Just joking around! I'm willing to go with attractive lady like you."

"aaand.. what is your specialization?"
"I am a commando and a team leader. I specialized in firearms, melee weapons, and of course know a few spells, not as excellent as a mage. I'm also expertize in parkour and stealth... PSICOM get into a lot of trouble when they're after me, trust my words."

"cool, cool. i guess youre a little talented filly? i like 'em like that."
"... Beg your pardon?"

kissed me in your room ,

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"and on to the second section! how tall are you, exactly?"
"... 5"9"."

"ah, just three inches taller. hm. so, what's under your clothes? not that i wont find out for myself."
"... That's my private- Are you trying to hit my nerve?.. Very well, I'm a former commando in Bodhum Security Regiment, see? So that means I'm athletically muscular... Satisfied?"

"okay, sorry. let's talk about some.. non - crude things? what's your personal style?"
"I'm wear something is more comfortable and practical. Now? I got a bomber jacket and a gray short sleeves shirt with turtle neck. A pair of jeans and hiking boots is my all-time-wearing-on, I'll never show any love to short pants and slippers. "

"hey, you look like that celebrity... what was the name...?"
"... Leon Scott Kennedy? Too many people called me that name... What's so special about this man?"

"right! i remember now. you look just like them. except better, heh heh..."
"If you saw my wanted poster in Cocoon newscasts and labeled my head as "Public Enemy of Cocoon", don't go for PSICOM if you value your life."

replied i love you too ,

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"soo, do you like or dislike anything?"
"I loved guns and combat knives, they will get handy on the battlefield. Target practice makes you more accurate with your guns. What I disliked are the fools who thought themselves are better than anyone else, I'll smacked one of them once... and believe me, it was a pleasant feeling."

"ohmyjonas, me too! wow, thats such a coincidence. so have any dirty habits or secrets?"
"We commandos of Bodhum Security Regiment... often doing some wetwork behind the public. Notorious terrorist cell take-down, anything related to covert and black operations... But what's the point of talking about this? Sanctum already labelled me and my commandos as traitors since after the Purge."

"coolness, yo. umm. home dawg. anyways. describe yourself."
"I only date with women... I like to joking around but if I'm in foul-mood, better don't disturb me unless you want a square in your face. I can be charming, flirtatious and sarcastic sometimes."

"like dude! we're so compatible..."
"Not to be a killjoy, but we are not."

a little bit insecure ,

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"okay, let's rush through this. i'm thinking dancing? then, we can talk about rooms."
"I hope this won't take long, because you're started to annoying me."

"shh, if my boss knew about our secret romance... so. what's your heritage?"
"I was born and raised in Bodhum like my elder brother did, my mother died due to disease when I was 4 and my father went missing during I was still in elementary school."

"wow, your family would love me! have anyone else in your family?"
"I only have an elder brother and a silvered-fur Husky named Sigar."

"oh. sounds horrible. haha. anything else important happen in your life?"
"Well, there's one... How I met a girl when I was still 16... I'm quite wild and mastered in pranks at high school of Bodhum but that doesn't mean I do not focus on studies. She was my class monitor and I had a crush on her, but due to my discipline problems... she was my rival. She was a rival until Valentine's Day in Bodhum, I confessed my crush to her and to my surprise... she had a crush on me too... From that day on, we are together like one. But now... she is with Goddess Etro, and her death takes me to the path of military life... serve and protect people."

"hey, look! we're done. so, i would ask you on a second date, but i'm about to explode. no, really. please step back."
"By Etro... what's wrong with the interviewers nowadays?"

of this mistreatment ,

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name. Temp
rp experience. 1 Year
rules. Thundaga
rp sample.

Quiet night in Palumpolum, suitable for night ops. He is in full black uniform with a balaclava mask, gloves, tactical vest and combat hiking boots. His team members followed his attire, all black and armed. They are in a inflatable boat, approaching to PSICOM jetty with extreme caution. Templar and his team were tasked to sabotage PSICOM naval port's supplies, two or three satchel charges will enough for collateral damage. It's been 2 weeks since after the Purge, so many lives are lost in Hanging Edge... Among them are Purgees, PSICOM troops as well as Templar's operatives. It's all about vengeance about the Purge in Bodhum, his hometown. Not just Templar's team, there two more squads

"Captain, this is Theta Squad... Approaching our location now."
"Beta Squad here, approaching the shore... No PSICOM in our sight so far."

"Remember our objectives... This is a covert insertion, no one knows we're here and do not fire unless we have to. As long we blow this place to oblivion, we're out from here... Guns with suppressors up!" Templar whispered to his teammates, he get his suppressor and attached it on the muzzle of his sub-machine gun. A suppressor is very vital in stealth or covert operations, it reduced the amount of noise and flash generated by firing the weapon. They are getting near to the jetty now and the sea water is getting shallow. They're in, Templar and his squad jump out from their boat and stomp their boots into the sands and sea water, they climb onto the jetty with their guns behind their backs.

"This is Delta Squad, we're in."

[Lightning Farron]

I like Aidan's premise.
Unfortunately, I'm afraid I'll have to turn him down.

There are a few aspects of his character that wouldn't fit given the canon information - Bodhum Security Regiment, the division of the Guardian Corps, is not a special or black ops regiment.

His entire history conflicts too much with a few dozen canons, especially the seven Pulse l'Cie. If I let you through with that history, a lot of continuum conflicts would arise.

There's also the matter of your writing. If I reread it two or three times, I can grasp what you're saying, and maybe I'm being a little harsh. But. You might want to get some more writing/RP experience under your belt before you try again. You're definitely allowed to.

As things stand, though, even though I like Aidan's premise, I simply can't accept him. Please understand the ripple effect it would have on the rest of the influenced canons.

DENIED.

Don't misunderstand, you aren't barred from trying again. Good luck.