Beet

[beet]

real big fan of yours ,

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quite the joke to you ,

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"so, hon. welcome to the distorted world.
what's your name?"
"Beet Uzumaki, but just call me Beet."

"ey, that's pretty cute. how old are you, and where are ya affiliated?"
"23 December 1996, I'm 15 and I usually find myself teaming up once and a while."

"young'un, are you? well then, i can deal. so... how bout you and me go on a date?"
"Me? I wouldn't if my life depended on it."

"aaand.. what is your specialization?"
"I'm a great swordsman and a bit skillful."

"cool, cool. i guess youre a little talented filly? i like 'em like that."
"What did you call me?!."

kissed me in your room ,

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"and on to the second section! how tall are you, exactly?"
"5.45 feet, and about 65.4 inches."

"ah, just three inches taller. hm. so, what's under your clothes? not that i wont find out for myself."
"I've got some muscles that are about as big as a 10 year old can get and I need to put on a bit of weight. What are you getting at?"

"okay, sorry. let's talk about some.. non - crude things? what's your personal style?"
"I usually wear a jacket with short sleeve under and long pants, otherwise I take the jacket off."

"hey, you look like that celebrity... what was the name...?"
"I'm Beet Uzumaki!"

"right! i remember now. you look just like them. except better, heh heh..."
"Maybe you saw me when I was younger."

replied i love you too ,

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"soo, do you like or dislike anything?"
"I like fighting, weapons and fun. I dislike lemon, enemy's and evil."

"ohmyjonas, me too! wow, thats such a coincidence. so have any dirty habits or secrets?"
"You might want to keep your head! But anyway, I have a habit of causing fights and I uugh *cough* have a secret of uugh *cough* stealing. But only when I need it! Dont tell anyone."

"coolness, yo. umm. home dawg. anyways. describe yourself."
"a short bit about anything else."

"like dude! we're so compatible..."
"Hmph, you say that to anyone you see dont you, if you want to keep your head you'l stop that."

a little bit insecure ,

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"okay, let's rush through this. i'm thinking dancing? then, we can talk about rooms."
"I don't dance but there's not much about rooms."

"shh, if my boss knew about our secret romance... so. what's your heritage?"
"WHAT?! COME SAY THAT RIGHT BY MY FACE!" "But anyway, I don't live too far from here I just left to travel. My Dad is kinda rough when training me and stuff but my Mom.....not so much about it since she's......"

"wow, your family would love me! have anyone else in your family?"
"I have a sister and a little brother too but my mom is... taking a long sleep...."

"oh. sounds horrible. haha. anything else important happen in your life?"
"I've been training a lot for this day, I just headed off now. I used to box and always lose and cry but when my Mom walked in I was so exited."

"hey, look! we're done. so, i would ask you on a second date, but i'm about to explode. no, really. please step back."
"Better than being hit by me, I gotta go anyway."

of this mistreatment ,

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name. Beet
age. 15
rp experience. 3 years
rules. Yes unless I missed a few lines.
rp sample.

"I dont want to fight, step aside before I rearrange your face". Said Beet. "Make me"! Replied the thief. With one punch the thieves sword broke in half and the theif was sent flying. "Nighty night". Said Beet. Beet stuck his weapon in the ground, held onto it, jumped, kicked the other thief in the face, got down punched the third flying then unstuck his sword and turned around to block another thieve's attack. "Die"! Shouted Beet. There was a huge hole in the ground and the thieves sword in half. The thief then punched Beet but Beet blocked with his sword but his feet sliding on the ground with his hands bleeding.

[Zexion]

PENDING

Through my read I noticed a few things that need some fixing, because I'm nice and it is my job I will list them for you.

1. You need to read the rules again; there is a code word in them that you place in the OOC section of the app to prove you read the rules.

2. Your RP sample is to short, it has to be at least 250 words or more.

3. The "you look like a celebrity" Question, you need to put your Face claim character’s name there. So for example if you were using Ichigo from Bleach but your character’s name was Paul in that question your answer would be Ichigo.

4. You mentioned he is 15 years old but then say he has as much muscle as a 10 year old can have, so you have two different ages for your character in his app.

5. You also missed a question "coolness, yo. Umm. Home dawg. Anyways. describe yourself." that question in fact. Please make sure you answer every question on the application.

Also can I just suggest you might want to expand on his likes and dislikes, just to make him a little more interesting I mean Fun is all well and good. However you could mention things he likes to do for fun, just a suggestion.


When you get everything just post here letting us know, and I will look over it again. Please don't feel discouraged you, and if you need any help feel free to ask or even pm me.