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Post by khaotix on May 7, 2011 22:43:00 GMT -5
Real big fan of yours, So tell me?
When does the fun start?
Can't you see?
We want the fun to start?
Or are you too dead? Quite the joke to you, "so, hon. welcome to the distorted world.what's your name?"'Laughs' "Do you like it?! It is glorious isn't it?We're Khaotix! Wanna play?" "ey, that's pretty cute. how old are you, and where are ya affiliated?""'Laughs'..you are very sweet, we only recently awakened, we have been asleep for soooo long! Khaotix will keep you awhile,and see what kind of tricks you can do for us! "young'un, are you?well then, i can deal.so... how bout you and me go on a date?"Glares angerly then suddenly grins mischievously"Khaotix knows what you are! A pedo! Hehehe... to think this form is attractive,maybe Khaotix can have you for a servent,pedo man." |
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Post by khaotix on May 7, 2011 23:00:58 GMT -5
"aaand.. what is your specialization?"Eyes glow red"Chaos of all sorts,my sick friend. Magick is only a solidification of chaos in the ether you know..." Eyes glow green"We know want Khaotix to show you?" "cool, cool. i guess youre a little talented filly? i like 'em like that.""Khaotix is the greatest! You haven't even seen our fun demonstration pedo man..."looks prepared to do something dangerous. Kissed me in your room, "and on to the second section! how tall are you, exactly?""We dislike being questioned pedo man... " (4 feet exactly) "ah, just three inches taller. hm. so, what's under your clothes? not that i wont find out for myself."Laughs hysterically with green eyes then has red and makes a twisted expression showing her fangs in a smile "Want to find out? We can go play some where... Khaotix keeps your soul though ok?" (child like build)
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Post by khaotix on May 7, 2011 23:23:25 GMT -5
"okay, sorry. let's talk about some.. non - crude things? what's your personal style?"Eyes turn yellow and she makes a annoyed face"Khaotix's clothes? We dress in whatever style we wish... Fun clothes that is unpredictable and makes us happy."(Girly outfits with wildly varying colors) "hey, you look like that celebrity... what was the name...?""You dare think of someone else when speaking to us...maybe you should be thrown away...doll." (Mimi / Cross Edge) "right! i remember now. you look just like them. except better, heh heh..." Eyes go red"What? Your a weirdo and a fool!" Replied i love you too , "soo, do you like or dislike anything?"Eyes become green and she smiles happily"Khaotix loves havoc and destruction! thousands of creatures screaming in unison make the best dolls!" Eyes go red and she sneers"We HATE boring and stupid toys like you are turning out to be..."
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Post by khaotix on May 7, 2011 23:39:10 GMT -5
"ohmyjonas, me too! wow, thats such a coincidence. so have any dirty habits or secrets?""We get bored vvvverrrrryyy easily... and despise boredom! Khaotix's secret?" Her eyes go yellow"Are you some brain dead jerk? We are born from the chaotic energy that gathered when this world was created."Her eyes go gray"We don't have parents... not physical ones anyway." "coolness, yo. umm. home dawg. anyways. describe yourself."Eyes go bright red"ENOUGH!! You will die soon for these questions!!" "like dude! we're so compatible..."Grins "In death... everything joins the chaos." A little bit insecure, "okay, let's rush through this. i'm thinking dancing? then, we can talk about rooms."She looks bored eyes gray"Its too late to amuse us...you will have to try harder servant. The interest of you being a pedo vanished sometime ago..."
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Post by khaotix on May 7, 2011 23:52:26 GMT -5
"shh, if my boss knew about our secret romance... so. what's your heritage?"
Eyes stay gray"Mother is chaos itself...however Khaotix's father is...magick itself we suppose..."her eyes become blue and she begins to ponder that thought.
"wow, your family would loveme! have anyone else in your family?"
Eyes go yellow with annoyance"SHUT UP! WE ARE THINKING!"
"oh. sounds horrible. haha. anything else important happen in your life?"
Still in thought she mutters"We were in a dark place...There was nothing just emptyness and boredom. Then a great flow engulfed Khaotix...we felt together as one at last. After that we fell into this world...this world...yes,it must have been made just for Khaotix!"She said the last part as if she was forcing herself to believe it.
"hey, look! we're done. so, i would ask you on a second date, but i'm about to explode. no, really. please step back."
Her eyes light up bright green and she runs towards him"WOW REALLY?! Lets explode TOGETHER!!"
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Post by khaotix on May 8, 2011 0:00:13 GMT -5
Of this mistreatment , name:mystery age:25 rp experience: year and a half rules: 'Laughs hysterically' THUNDAGA, THUNDAGA , THUNDAGA !! rp sample:[From Lenneth] "The dark energy continues to gather,my lord. " a man with jet black hair spoke this as he approched the highly polished throne of the tyrant king.Lennith floated far above listening as they made there dark plans."So they plan to revive the dark art of black magic...Blasphemous!"Lenneth knew of there plan but did not want to recklessly destroy the entire kingdom.It had already been in enough turmoil due to its tyrantual king. She decided the best course would be to annihilate the evil ruler and his henchmen,of which it seemed were now gathered in their great hall.Within the hall sat the king and three vassals,one of which was the black haired man who seemed to be the kings right hand. |
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Post by khaotix on May 8, 2011 0:01:28 GMT -5
He and the one who had blonde hair and a scar running across his face standing to his right were heavily armored,and wore swords at their sides.
The white haired man to the left however seemed to be a mage.He wore a black robe and held a book(most likely magical) at his side."Indeed...it is time to show these tainted mortals the gods wrath." Lenneth flew straight through the large stained glass window and landed in the room standing a good distance from her enemies. "Lenneth Valkyrie... we've been expecting you." The evil king almost spit the words,but then he smiled. Looking at the disgusting smile sickened Lenneth greatly.Then she noticed she was surrounded by the others,the black haired man stood in front of his king,while the other two were to her left(the mage and right (the scar face)."You seem to be confident defieller of souls,you truly think lord Odin would allow this?Your acts will not be tolerated!"She drew her sword and prepared to face them.
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Post by khaotix on May 8, 2011 0:03:14 GMT -5
"You can't stop me foolish woman!I have mastered the dark arts behold!" The king made a odd gesture with his hand,and a massive barrier surrounded Lenneth."Now you are powerless hahahaha,destroy her!"The black hair man turned to his scarred comrade"You have the privilege,Gregory,strike her down."The one named Gregory grinned"I'll be glad to..."He rushed at her with his sword above his head."This is ridiculous..."Lenneth thought,"They believe this barrier is working? I suppose they never even realised that this spell is flawed..."She leaped into the air and brought her sword down to the ground on decent. A shockwave emitted from the blow and shattered the barrier easily.Gregory stopped in his tracks,mouth hung low in surprise.The king stood up and roared "Impossible! This spell was supposed to have been prefected!!"He glared menacingly at the mage.
[NOTE: Boy the sample part is a pain.]
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Post by Lightning Farron on May 10, 2011 21:56:04 GMT -5
Right. Well. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes in the app, but even though I'm usually really cruel with apps on that basis, that isn't my most pressing issue.
Is there a way you can alter her character to uh, not relate her to the Calamity? We've had a similar issue in the past, but regarding an OC that was apparently closely related to a few canons. While sometimes it works, we ask that familial relationships to canons AND/OR site characters not be made.
I hate to do this, she sounds like a really fun and interesting (and wonderfully psychotic!) character, but I can't pass you through with that connection.
You will have to cut off that connection, or start over.
PENDING.
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Post by khaotix on May 10, 2011 22:26:42 GMT -5
I had a feeling the calamity thing would be a problem.
Took away all calamity references (ok for her parents to be weird stuff like chaos and magick?),also fixed some spelling errors.
Good?
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Post by Lightning Farron on May 10, 2011 23:17:56 GMT -5
ACCEPTED!
Welcome to Calamity's Cry! |
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