Maria Traydor

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real big fan of yours ,

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"I'm doing all
I wanna do
And I won't stop
until I can't move
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quite the joke to you ,

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"so, hon. welcome to the distorted world.
what's your name?"
"My full name is Maria Traydor, and I don't have any nicknames that I can call of they are gone with most of my memories I can remember my name though. "

"ey, that's pretty cute. how old are you, and where are ya affiliated?"
"My birthday is July 14, and I am nineteen years old I guess you I am affiliated with Archades."

"young'un, are you? well then, i can deal. so... how bout you and me go on a date?"
"Um I don't think so, but if you want to that be okay with me I don't mind it at all I'm heterosexual by the way."

"aaand.. what is your specialization?"
"I am a physical and magic user I am very confident in my guns and my magic as well they both had serve me well. I had been taught to use a gun, and my kicks can really hurt."

"cool, cool. i guess youre a little talented filly? i like 'em like that."
"I guess so I am talented in both physical and magic since I had been a magic-user along with physical-user as well."

kissed me in your room ,

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"and on to the second section! how tall are you, exactly?"
"I am five foot and three inches tall thank you so very much."

"ah, just three inches taller. hm. so, what's under your clothes? not that i wont find out for myself."
"You are a pervert you know that I am used to hearing that from others, but if you want to know I am lean and skinny. I haven't gone over one hundred and four lbs. I am very much had been keeping at the one hundred and four hundred lbs since I had hardly ever eat."

"okay, sorry. let's talk about some.. non - crude things? what's your personal style?"
"I dress in military outfit when I am outside working for Larsa, and when I am at home I do casual clothing since I had been thinking doing my clothes in casual when its my days off."

"hey, you look like that celebrity... what was the name...?"
"Forgot already I had told you its Maria Traydor sheesh how can someone forget so easily especially in your case I mean you are very much had been told once."

"right! i remember now. you look just like them. except better, heh heh..."
"Okay thanks that's a lot better than most would say, and I had hear it from Albel."

replied i love you too ,

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"soo, do you like or dislike anything?"
"My likes are people, working, and being there for others. My dislikes are chocolate, being short, and very much being betrayed by others."

"ohmyjonas, me too! wow, thats such a coincidence. so have any dirty habits or secrets?"
"My habit is twirling my hair and a secret huh I liked Albel Nox as a friend, and I can do Alteration."

"coolness, yo. umm. home dawg. anyways. describe yourself."
"I am very charismatic, and very much there for others. I had gotten an impeccable integrity that I had show to others. I will not back down for anyone since I don't want to back down for anyone who doesn't care about me, but I do have my flaws when I get angry I do kick."

"like dude! we're so compatible..."
"Probably I like black hairs with streaks better."

a little bit insecure ,

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"okay, let's rush through this. i'm thinking dancing? then, we can talk about rooms."
"Sure we can go dancing if you like what, and what you want to use the rooms for -gasp- unless you want to get kill you will not ask me that again."

"shh, if my boss knew about our secret romance... so. what's your heritage?"
"I don't remember my biological parents, but my adopted parents are Jessie and her husband Richard Traydor. My hometown is Archades, but I was born on earth I was just raised on Archades."

"wow, your family would love me! have anyone else in your family?"
"My friends Fayt, Albel the Wicked, and every other friend I had came to know is my best friend."

"oh. sounds horrible. haha. anything else important happen in your life?"
"Well I was orphaned sometime ago then Jessie and Richard Traydor from Archades had came, and adopted me. I had never thought I was going to live that long, but I would want to make sure that I was going to do what was possible. I had meet Albel and Fayt when I was nineten. I had believed for so long that Fayt was my fraternal brother I meant that we have the same hair color. I had wanted to make sure that I had kept my friendships with Albel and Fayt they look so great together.."

"hey, look! we're done. so, i would ask you on a second date, but i'm about to explode. no, really. please step back."
"Thank you for the interview I must go now."

of this mistreatment ,

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name. Garnet
age. 25
rp experience. 13 years
rules. Maria will do thundaga
rp sample.

Garnet was walking around the courtyard, and she had kept her cloak on so that she couldn't be spotted by anyone who wasn't expected her. She had been walking around the just singing her song she hadn't know where she had gone wrong. She had luckily had came to where Tantalus had put on their play. She had been looking around, and she was very much had been a bit upset she had heard from the townsfolk that Garnet Til Alexandros was dead, when here she was safe and sound. She was very much had been wanted to make sure that she had never wanted to have her feelings being betrayed. Garnet had thought for a second, and she wasn't knowing what she was going to find out why this was true. She had never wanted to be without Zidane, but she couldn't control the events that had expired.

She had stood in the courtyard, and she was just singing as much as she had wanted to she was feeling sad, and she was down as well. Garnet had never wanted anyone to see her tears they hadn't stopped coming down. She had been crying for seem to be an eternity. Garnet had been thinking what had happened between Zidane, and her. She had wanted to speak to him as much as she possibly could she didn't wanted to leave it out on the air like this. She had remembered this spot, and she was going to do what she possibly could do with her own life being in Alexandria she had her memories still.

Alone for a while I've been searching through the dark
For traces of the love you left inside my lonely heart
To weave by picking up the pieces that remain
Melodies of life--love's lost refrain

Our paths they did cross, though I cannot say just why
We met, we laughed, we held on fast, and then we said goodbye
And who'll hear the echoes of stories never told?
Let them ring out loud till they unfold
In my dearest memories, I see you reaching out to me
Though you're gone, I still believe that you can call out my name

A voice from the past, joining yours and mine
Adding up the layers of harmony
And so it goes, on and on
Melodies of life,
To the sky beyond the flying birds--forever and beyond

So far and away, see the bird as it flies by
Gliding through the shadows of the clouds up in the sky
I've laid my memories and dreams upon those wings
Leave them now and see what tomorrow brings

In your dearest memories, do you remember loving me?
Was it fate that brought us close and now leaves me behind?

If I should leave this lonely world behind
Your voice will still remember our melody
Now I know we'll carry on
Melodies of life
Come circle round and grow deep in our hearts
As long as we remember

She was mostly had been sitting there singing since she was so down in the dumps. Garnet hadn't know a reason that she was even here for. She had still loved Zidane Tribal as much as she could remember. She hadn't thought she was going to feel like this after she had disappeared one day thanks to a Zu. She was mostly had wanted to be in Zidane's life once again. Garnet had never told him her own feelings, but she was afraid that she would be rejected. She had sat down where she was doing I Want to Be Your Canary as Cornelia. She didn't wanted to be feeling the sadness she was very happy being near Zidane's side even if it was for that short time. Garnet had loved Zidane with all her heart and soul.

I wonder if Zidane could find me here, and I had hoped that Zidane isn't mad at me. It had been months since I had last saw Zidane, and he was very much had wanted to kidnapped me thanks to Uncle Cid's plan, and I had wanted to be kidnapped. Garnet thought. She had sit there waiting for someone to come to find her. She was very much doing her entire life thinking, and she had knew that Zidane had became the bigger part of her life. She hadn't wanted to be apart from Zidane, but she hadn't knew how to find him since she wasn't a genome at all she was born as a Summoner from the Summoner race.

She had remembered when Zidane had first came into her life, and she was very mostly had been wanting that piece of her life back she had fell in love with him since she had fallen for him. She had also remember him saying that he was falling for her she had felt the same way. Garnet had closed her eyes, and she had felt the eidolons inside of her, but she didn't know how to summon them just yet. She had closed her eyes, and opened up her ears she had been listening to her heart for quite a while. Garnet didn't known where she didn't know where she was going or how she would get there, but she wouldn't tell Zidane goodbye ever she had fall for him as much she was blinded by her love for Zidane that she had been working on her street lingo.

She was thinking a lot these past few days that she had been back in Alexandria. She had been wanted to tell Zidane back then what she had been feeling, but never got that chance. She had wanted to make sure that she gotten the chance to tell Zidane all the things she had wanted to say, but never could. Garnet had stayed put since Zidane could possibly find her easier. She hadn't wanted to be without Zidane's friendship if that's what he had wanted this time. Garnet had never found a good way to tell Zidane her feelings since she was sorting them all out before she was going to tell Zidane.

Her tears were going down her face like the rain she had never knew that she was going to cry this much. She had been trying to make herself happy, but she had needed Zidane to be there telling her stories. Garnet had always enjoyed hearing about Zidane's stories of his past. She had remembered when she was Dali with him, Vivi, and Steiner that she had begun to sing Melodies of Life in the middle of the night. She just stood there looking up she hadn't wanted anyone to know she was even here.

Of all things I had could ever be here I am being thinking of the past when I had first met Zidane, I guess I can't move on from the way my heart felt about him. It must have been fate that brought him and me together. I don't want to be without him not ever I don't know how I had became to love Zidane, but he's the most important guy in my life. I had always wanted to tell Zidane how I had felt, but my feelings and the words become jumbled up with each other then I sound like I'm spluttering out words. Garnet thought.

She had been thinking a lot of what she had wanted she had came with one word Zidane. Her feelings hadn't changed one bit. She had still felt the same way she had all those months ago for Zidane still she just so scared that he might rejected her. She had stood there with a scared look on her face. She was still here, but she was a bit cold. She hadn't wanted anyone to know why she was even here since she had been cloaked up by the same cloak that Zidane first meet her in.

She had smooth out her long hair, and her hair did grow back where it was before. She had just wanted to make sure that she was going to do a lot of things she never wanted to make him worried about her. Garnet just wanted to make sure that she was going to do what she had needed to do about her life. She knew that she was going to need a conversation with Zidane to catch up with each other. She just didn't know if Zidane would ever come. She had been cold, but she was still was going to stand here. Garnet had deeply had loved him, and would do anything to make him smile. Garnet was thinking a lot of Zidane, and how he was. She was so sure that Zidane had questions where she was, but she had welcomed those questions with open arms. Garnet had thought of something. "I love you Zidane deeply and truly I would always love you Zidane I don't want to hurt you ever since you mean so much to me you are the most important guy to me." Garnet said.

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I see what you mean by trying to figure out what to do regarding her memories.

Huh. I'm trying to figure out where to draw the line here; that is some crazy prolific memory jumbling there, and typically the Mist doesn't cause so much jumbling as it does flat-out memory loss.

So I have an issue.

Though I can tell you flat-out that since I play Larsa and you haven't cleared her backstory with me beforehand, I can't allow Maria to be on a first-name basis with him. It's alright if she mentions working for the Archadian military, or for the Emperor's glory or something equally as peon as that, but they don't know each other personally. ;___;

I'm also questioning how this memory thing checks out with her personality. By nature Maria is determined to figure out anything and everything related to her - remember how diligent she was in pursuing Dr. Leingod? It doesn't make sense to me that she wouldn't take not having most of her 'memories' as a bad sign, but in the app, she seems to be just fine with it.

I think that this whole alternate history raises more problems and questions than what it's worth. As it is, right now I can't accept it, because the entire memory alteration (heh, heh, it's a pun) is too unfounded... it seems very random. Very random.

PENDING.

Try and see if you can rework her history into something that makes a little more sense given the circumstances of CC and Maria's own personality, if you ARE dead set on making it something other than canon. I would ADVISE that you stick to canon, however, to avoid conflicts with other canons. Good luck!