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Post by Elgar Estmorrod on Sept 21, 2011 11:37:41 GMT -5
Elgar is an Assassin, one of the best at that. He has always clung to the darkness of night, always invisible to those he stalks. Once he attacks, he disappears without a trace, none have yet to find him after each attack. Only a feather, lays on the breast of the mark he had claimed.
Once per thread, Elgar can take half the damage from an attack by escaping into the darkness. In which he may either attack afterwards for a quarter more of the damage that he'd usually give or flee the battle completely. He remains invisible to the enemy and ally alike until he either attacks once or flee's completely. If he flee's, he leaves the thread. And if he attacks, he will become completely visible once more and unable to use this ability again. |
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Post by Gabranth on Sept 21, 2011 23:27:55 GMT -5
Pending!
Being able to stop an attack completely is normally a one use, once per thread thing. You've added on extra damage and a get out of jail free card. You can see the problem, no? You can get rid of the extra abilities, ie the damage bonus and fleeing. Or the invulnerability. You could also reduce the amount of damage taken, and change the "I take no damage" into damage reduction. Over all it's a really interesting ability, but it just needs some tweaking. Good luck~ |
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Post by Elgar Estmorrod on Sept 24, 2011 11:34:55 GMT -5
Edited from what we spoke of in the cbox
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Post by Gabranth on Sept 28, 2011 23:33:30 GMT -5
Pending!
Sorry taking so long, and for hitting you in the face with all these pendings. I'm fine with the changes, HOWEVER the wording is really really choppy. The last sentence does not need to be in parenthesis. You should take out the word "avoid" because it will just cause confusion. Instead you could say how he retreats to the shadows to blah blah stat increases. In general can you just stream line it? I'm just worried someone can get confused due to the wording. Sorry, I love you. |
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Post by Elgar Estmorrod on Oct 6, 2011 12:55:40 GMT -5
Edited with sorrow :c
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Post by Gabranth on Oct 7, 2011 21:57:40 GMT -5
Approved!
Yesh, approved. Sorry for being picky. |
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